Name : Hairiah
Student Number : A1B214258
Intoductory Paragraph : There are many popular romantic places in the world and Eiffel Tower is one of them. There are several reason why Eiffel Tower is very popular. The Eiffel tower became an icon for the city of Paris and France. When evening, the led lights are sparkled and make wonderful light show. Also, by using elevator, tourists can go into the top of tower and can see whole view of Paris city.

 Topic Sentence 1 : The Eiffel tower is one of the romantic place
1. Support : Eiffel tower has become the icon for a city of paris and france.
2. Support : When evening, there is light shows
3. Support : Tourists can go into the top of tower

Topic sentence 2 : The Eiffel tower is the icon for a city of Paris and France
1. Support : The Eiffel tower is the biggest structure in the country of Paris.
2. Support : The Eiffel Tower is one of the best man-built structures and the popular building in the world.
3. Support : The Eiffel Tower is the most visited monument in entire world, around almost 7.1 thousand people came every years.

Topic Sentence 3 : The Eiffel tower is wonderful building
1. Support : The Eiffel Tower is the tallest structure in France until the construction of a military transmitter in the town of Saissac in 1973.
2. Support : There is thousands of lights flash in the hour of the evening.
3. Support : With the light shows and the location of the tower that were nearby to sein river, makes the Eiffel Tower as a more romantic place and wonderful building.